Thursday, 5 November 2015

Similie poem

                                       Tiger



                                                        A tiger is like a fast machine
                                                       has sharp strong teeth like blades
                                                      the fur is as soft as cotton
                                                      the pray has no chance of escaping
                                                     it hides,then pounces                                                                                                                                                            
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5 comments:

  1. Mrs S5 November 2015 at 13:16

    A lovely poem, Morgan. I can just see that tiger pouncing on its prey! Well done.
    Mrs S.

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  2. ehlucasw20156 November 2015 at 12:11

    Morgan I love how you mentioned how fluffy it is.
    And how it is about machines and blades.

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  3. ehlucasw201523 November 2015 at 15:04

    Morgan, I think that little tiger is very cute.
    I love it when you say "has sharp strong teeth like blades.
    Well done Morgan I love this poem.

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  4. ehpiad201523 November 2015 at 19:06

    Your picture is very cute. I like it how you say the tiger is as fast as a machine. I like your colours.

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  5. Kimberley C19 April 2016 at 09:11

    amazing

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